David Darbyshire

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Lucky Queen - Unlucky King

Poem by David Darbyshire

There was a Lucky Queen
And a very Un-Lucky King
The King was never Seen
The Queen did her own Thing

The Queen was the One
That got everything Done
The King sat in his Room
In the Kingdom of Doom

One day the King started to Write
The Queen thought, he's not so Bright
But the King, wrote and Wrote
And then threw them in the Moat

The Unlucky King,
Tried his Thing
But, 'it didn't work Out'
The Queen would Shout

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  • ***** ********* (12/5/2005 5:28:00 AM)

    David, you must surely be bored shitless mate! lol What can I say! ! ! rofl. Please try harder, springs to mind! (just jesting) MAYBE! ! I noticed a typo 3rd verst 4th line 'threw'. The thing about queens, is that they must serve their king well! I wonder if their is an academy to learn that stately stuff? Have a nice day 8 from Tai(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 5, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, December 5, 2005

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