Friday, April 3, 2015

Lunatic Poet Comments

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With all seven colors, like beautiful rainbow
Culminating just in one like golden glow
As pure as white like shimmering snow
Like daffodil in pond you are in me to grow
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Roseann Shawiak 08 April 2015

Great imagery, truth and honesty throughout your poem. There's a sadness for a love that is not reciprocated, it touches the heart. Love is never pathetic, a person choosing not to love, hoping for love and never giving it to another, is a selfish desire. Fantastic poem, Col. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

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