Tuesday, October 20, 2015

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i rept my rove into the woods
arched none but dark pits and roaring articulations
day stumped by night, sun stumped by moon
i drowsed hoping an amended eternity may burst soon
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khalid abf 22 October 2015

thank you

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Kelly Kurt 20 October 2015

A nicely written piece, Khalid.Thanks

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Liza Sudina 20 October 2015

So exciting and dynamic! Nice perception of a woman! her profound soul and impact! and after - love and longing for her Thank you! ! her urging voice healed the stress running through my brain like a shepherd she was there like a well wisher like a suitor of my love, she was there like a liberator of my life she enlightened my tendency to have determination against distitude

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