Lust Poem by uder pressure

Lust



You mezmorize
in every way
your eyes
draw me in
Capture Me.
You make me
crazy, I can't help
but think of you
In all sorts of ways.
Your hands rough
filling me with
Excitement
your voice
hypnotizing me
you opened
my world
to a new kind of
obsession

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neil Marsden 01 October 2008

Hi there, This is a very skillful little piece whose simplicity belies the intensity of the messages within, Written in such a way asd to present itself as captivating to the reader. Very well written! Neil.

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