Joy O'Pateng

Lust...

Lust destroyed my love
Lust pushed away my one
Lust made me weak
Lust took the one love
Lust killed my happiness
Lust is a sin I committed
Lust, I shouldn't had done
Lust got my suffocating
Lust made light turn into darkness
Lust made me miss my wife
Lust, my innocent girl is hurt
Lust I hurt myself too
Lust I miss my family I built
Lust, you were my biggest mistake....

Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 22, 2009

Add this poem to MyPoemList

Rating Card

3,8 out of 5
12 total ratings
rate this poem

Comments about Lust... by Joy O'Pateng

  • Adeeb AlfatehAdeeb Alfateh (7/9/2019 2:01:00 AM)

    destroyed my love
    pushed away my one

    superb write on
    lusty 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Cambridge Keenan (7/10/2013 8:21:00 PM)

    Yes Lust is DESTROYER..............: (but such a fun one until you lose in the end......

    Report Reply
    4 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mandy Lamotte (12/2/2011 7:37:00 AM)

    Lust sucks. Because of lust i have lost someone dear to me... I feel your pain.

    Report Reply
    3 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Naysha Thomas (1/27/2010 5:58:00 PM)

    I LOVE HOW YOU SHARED EVERYTHING LUST MADE ME DO ALOT OF THING TO AND IT MADE CRY ND WANT TO DO IT AGIAN IT MADE ME A BAD PERSON TO TRUST ND LOVE: '(

    Report Reply
    4 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Katellyne Baker (12/30/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    That's really good, pretty deep. I know the feeling, ive comitted that sin once.

    Report Reply
    3 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Catrina Heart (8/22/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    fine list of lust, enumeration of cause and effect.........Thanks.....Welcome to PH

    Report Reply
    3 person liked.
    0 person did not like.



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?