Lying Love Poem by Jessica Caswell

Lying Love

Rating: 5.0


if you really loved me
you would not only say it
but show it
but all I hear is the flat lie
of 'I love you'
and i know it's not true
but i just can't stay away from you
you don't pick up my calls
or return them
or hug me
or kiss me
or ask me if I'm ok
when my heart is really breaking
to tiny peices
if you would only ask me how I feel
how can i bring myself to tell you
that I'm leaving you today

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 04 June 2009

you could v told him in a poetic riddle...filled with emotions...nice one 10 with love shan

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Dans Only 24 May 2009

I really liked this one. Superb finish.

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Kyrsten Gaddis 22 May 2009

lololol sorta like my one poem....'If you love me'....i think it's like that one....like one of 'em anyway

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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

Very expressive poem about someone that you loved but the love was not true it was lying love that he was always lying to you and hurting you. Thank you.

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Jazz Annis 17 May 2009

that was a real expressive poem...loved it! !

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