Good start, You can improve your writing skills by reading more poems by others . Good job!
This is your first poem, I know you can do better. You can also read my poems, rate them and give a comment. Take a minute to read an empty beach, not you again and many more
Warnings of the forgotten... yes memories that linger in the brain and mind repeated in unexpected moments. memories of love, hate, offense, inner pain......... all that comes out without a control. in short verses you have written a lot. thank you. tony