A dazzling large red rose danced
on the brim of her yellow straw hat,
flip flopping over her dark brow and
deep set eyes.
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Describe so perfectly and comically, it must be you walking down the street, catching all the men's eyes. Scintillating poem! Xs and Os
So well-described that the reader can easily see this extrovert lady, tottering in high heels and with a red gash of a mouth, cigarette placed expertly between her fingers, and turning all the mens' heads. A visual poem. Love, Fran xx