Makes Me Wonder Poem by Beverley Katherine

Makes Me Wonder

Rating: 5.0


if he was as fragile as he seemed.
(splinters of his heart
connected to his aorta
or to her veins?)

makes me wonder
if she bleeds pieces of him
or fragments in her tears
or someone else altogether

makes me wonder
how we'll ever know
when the box is marked fragile
and inside
is a sealed heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Parker 04 January 2009

Nice work, short a sweet and straight to the point. A worthy 10

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Raj Arumugam 03 January 2009

very clever lines; very original thought

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Joseph Poewhit 02 January 2009

That is a real interesting thought

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