Friday, September 11, 2009

Manmade Money Or Money Made Man Comments

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Who are we if we are nothing...
If reason stands a chance against no chance
But opportunity still presents a face
And blithely we appreciate, such fate, and chance and grace...
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Julia Grandi
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Kay Staley 18 November 2014

It has good parts and some potential. A bit dillydally and hard to keep focused on with shifting ideologies running throughout at random times. Not a bad poem though.

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name can be whispered into a sea of murky water But who will see the voice And who will heed the call While all the eyes are busy watching The tempestuous affairs of gold Julia awesome... please share them all I'm sure there is lot more in store

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