Tuesday, November 27, 2007

Manner Of Manners Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two wrongs may not make a right
But three wrongs means you’re on a roll.
Let my apprehension flow out with the tide.
Why not put one more to the final toll?
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Frederick Francis
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Adeline Foster 07 December 2007

Hello, Frederick: This piece is intriguing. I liked the word-picture ‘A cat to dancing yarn’. But the line that really stood out is ‘One can be polite and completely un-kind’. I can tell that you do like poetry but why is it ‘the furthest thing from my profession’. May I ask your profession? I too am a Canadian; living and teaching in the States. I am told that there is a lot of Canadian flavor in my poetry. You might enjoy 'The Cat Is Free'. Adeline

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May Heron 27 November 2007

I enjoyed reading this piece. My favorite is the middle stanza. Thanks

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