There was a link between us and them
Severed when we were earthquaked,
Subducted into a mantel of hatred.
2 - i guess there is symbolism here. But, maybe not. i wonder if you are suggesting that human populations were long ago separated from one another due to the breaking apart of some continents and throwing up of mountain ranges. hmm? and eventually, when oceans and mountains could be crossed more easily, different languages etc. etc. caused animosity to rear its ugly head. bri :) to MyPoemList
1 - " Scientific definitions for subduct A geologic process in which one edge of one lithospheric plate is forced below the edge of another. The denser of the two plates sinks beneath the other." Perhaps you 'want' " mantle" **, not " mantel" , two different words. ** in geology. " the portion of the earth, about 1800 miles (2900 km) thick, between the crust and the core"
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
3 - i'm sure some (many) readers could use a Poet's Notes for this poem, to help them figure it out. Or, DID i MISINTERPRET it? ? ha ha. bri :)