Many Questins Can You Help Solve Them? Poem by dakota lee

Many Questins Can You Help Solve Them?

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am i dumb?
am i stupid?
am i to skinny?
am i sad?
am i happy?
am i emo?
do the scars on my wrist give it away?
am i impulsive?
am i depressed?
am i bipolar?
am i a hypocrite?
am i a lier?
am i a failure?
does everything i do give it away?
am i a loser?
am i an outcast?
or am i to popular?
am i a fake?
or am i too much myself?
does the way i act give it away?
is there realy anything left in my life?
does my life have a purpose?
if so what?
when will i die?
how will i die?
will i be missed?
or just forgotten?
please can anyone help?
or will these questins i have came upon
remain unanswered?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Skytta 16 October 2009

Only if you think you are do you lack intelligence, Only if you want to be could stupid make sense, Only if none are smaller than you and unhappy with yourself, Only if you choose not to smile when smiling sometimes helps, Only if you wish to claim a title such as mentioned, Only if the world you show and simply for attention, Only if you choose to do things without thought of reprocussion, Only if you think your ways are tough hard and too outnumbered, Only if you act like your crazy then suddenly act just like your mother, Only if you say one thing and then you act on another, Only if you say the things that never could be true, Only if you can't complete the goals you set for you, Only if you do everything you do simply to give away everything that's you, Only if when you put something in a place and then it you lose, Only if you choose to stay away from those that are unlike, Only if you hate those around that keep you company, Only if you where a smile when frown you feel's appropriate, Only if you think there is such a thing as being not yourself indeed, Only if you act like you don't know what you give away, Only if you belive that life isn't everything to cherish, Always if you know that you are child of he who you he made, Its up to you to choose to what you dedicate your life before you perish, No one knows when we go except the one who made us, Time undoubtedly ends everthing and everyone so what's the fuss, With every loss the world will cry exceptionally lamented, No matter small or large a favor in memories you will be cemented, The only one aside from none that can help yourself is you, As for your questions being unanswered, no more will this be true. Hopefully this makes sense to you :) and good luck, I enjoy your writing.

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