Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Mariposa Comments

Rating: 5.0

On her slim back of the neck a tattoo is about to flee
And that's my favorite blue butterfly.
A strange woman never seen her before,
She crossed the road and walked towards the park.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2009

Strange how a fleeting moment can create such a lasting impression. Your blue butterfly is as unusual as it is dramatic. Your addendum adds a note of security to the poem. Like the roots of the lotus blossom that hold its stem so strongly and enable it to find the light. Beautiful verse. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 26 May 2009

What a mysteriously beautiful poem picture. Your lady with the blue butterfly belongs in a romance novel.10/10 for this one. Warmest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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