Marking Time Poem by Lynn Anne Brown

Marking Time



I like the marks Time's made on my body and my face
They talk about a journey and not about a race
Some things I learned quite quickly
Other things came slow
Some remain a mystery
Others I'll come to know
They've been the places I have been
And done the things that I have done
And when the story's all been written
I pray that it is Wisdom I have won
Because no other prize shinea brighter
In the Moonlight or the Sun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Schexnider 21 February 2014

Very good poem, but I'd like to give a little constructive criticism - I feel the ending is not as conclusive as you intended. But I really enjoyed the simplicity of the thought. Thanks for sharing

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Lynn Anne Brown

Lynn Anne Brown

Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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