Marking Time Poem by Lynn Anne Brown

Marking Time



I like the marks Time's made on my body and my face
They talk about a journey and not about a race
Some things I learned quite quickly
Other things came slow
Some remain a mystery
Others I'll come to know
They've been the places I have been
And done the things that I have done
And when the story's all been written
I pray that it is Wisdom I have won
Because no other prize shinea brighter
In the Moonlight or the Sun

Friday, February 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: places,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Schexnider 21 February 2014

Very good poem, but I'd like to give a little constructive criticism - I feel the ending is not as conclusive as you intended. But I really enjoyed the simplicity of the thought. Thanks for sharing

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Lynn Anne Brown

Lynn Anne Brown

Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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