Masquerade Comments

Heart of hearts, once filled with love I’ve now filled with pain, Will I or do I, Have the right to love again..........i like this part..the poem is so sad but too beautiful.....

This is a beautifully structured poem, and although dark and sad it holds up a question on the last line which if answered in the positive will help all in the same position to feel hope again. The piece reads well Daniel, and shows yours aptitude with line and metre. Keep writing. - a 10 + from me.