May I? Poem by valarie adams

May I?



-May I hang from the ceiling, mouth shut, dress high, hands tied, eyes dried?
-May I make art with metal & have it come out red?
-May I slowly stop breathing, using only my hands?
-May I swallow some candy, pass out, & drool?
-May I sleep with tears, waiting my happiness to wake me up?
-May I eat some food, then throw it up because it doesn't taste good?

Thursday, January 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Victims actually tell you what they are feeling, or how they are suffering.They tell you without actually telling you... They may keep things from you but from experience they will show signs... just look out for people. Because you are important, & you didn't commit suicide to end your life, you committed suicide to end your pain.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Alston Jr 04 January 2015

It takes a lot to say die and mean it, takes even more to say live and do it. At first read I thought unusual things to ask permission for, a touch of dark humor perhaps and from whom is the permission being asked? Then I read the Poet's Notes, it all came together a little clearer much of what's being shared in each verse. Looking forward to read more from you.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 January 2015

Commendable work, young lady...only to be equaled by your Poet's Notes which employs a very powerful and erudite social well-being statement...Good on you & a Happy, Healthy & Creative 2 0 1 5! ~FjR~

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