Friday, June 19, 2009

Maybe Forever Comments

Rating: 4.0

My eyes wandering
My heart pounding
My mind doubting
My soul searching
...
Read full text

Arvie Calimlim
COMMENTS
Danzen D. 24 July 2009

Searching seems long...but believe in yourself, and you will find. There will come a time when it seems everything is lost..the directions are wrong..the paths are gone....but go straight where your heart leads you, never give up, and you will suddenly see that object you've been searching and cherish it. ^_^

0 0 Reply
Lorena Cruz 28 June 2009

your best poem yet! !

0 0 Reply
Nothern Cross 19 June 2009

A sad but relaxing poem, i sympathize with your suggestion that identity is forged through love, i'd like to add though, that this isn't limited to only romantic love.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success