Monday, September 8, 2014

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Zahra Abbas
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Khalida Bano Ali 13 September 2014

Lovely two lines, really liked it.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 September 2014

A nice begin, liked it, Keep writing.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 08 September 2014

Well tried poem but started with USKI and ended with same...so what you have to do Chehre se muskurahat jhalak rahi thi uski so beautiful well analogy Gham and Khusi well wrote try and try and try

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