Saturday, April 16, 2016

Melody Of Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's no clamor, no uproar at all, silent hours
Two birds and a moon can be seen behind the chhatim tree
Look at the glory and jealousy and greed mingle with soil
The soil turns these into another form
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Matin Bairagi
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 April 2016

The best lines and stanzas that touch my heart are... Look at the glory and jealousy and greed mingle with soil The soil turns these into another form That's the eternal poem, that are written in silence The wind sleeps drowning its body in silence And poems are written under the moonlight, soundless, devoid of memory Only a poem remain, that are written under the moonlight The star-clad glittering blue sky Announces the last scene of existence of truth Poems tells the truth, poems are liberated Poetry never glorifies anybody uselessly Only glorifies beauty and beauty is truth Look the poetry is loosing the darkness And the birds and moon is not to be seen Still you and me are walking through the countless graves And soundless silence Speak: Is last existence of man is unbroken silence! You conclude with a very impressive appeal. Thank you poet for ths praiseworthy effort. It deserves 10.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 April 2016

no uproars at all, silent hours..

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