I’m falling apart-
Baby stitch me back together.
I’m drowning here-
Baby pull me out.
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That was really cool. Real catchy, and there was still alot of emotion in it too. Nice job. I really like writing songs too, so if you want, you can check out the newest song I wrote 'My Turn'.
i really like it great job.if you like take alook at my poem 'you don't care' and tell me what you think