Melt Poem by Lex Freedman

Melt

Rating: 5.0


I’m falling apart-
Baby stitch me back together.
I’m drowning here-
Baby pull me out.
I’m screaming out loud-
I just need you to hear me.
Baby why won’t you walk over here
And save me?

You can see I’m helpless now-
And you’re just standing there.
Watching me fade away-
Can’t you just move closer
And pull me in?
And melt it away-
Let's melt away.
So baby when

You’re falling apart,
I can stitch you back together.
When you’re drowning in,
I can pull you out.
When you’re screaming my name,
Baby I'll hear you out.
Let me walk over-
(Let me walk over there)
And save you

And save you-
And save me-
Baby let's melt away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Nelson 04 March 2010

i really like it great job.if you like take alook at my poem 'you don't care' and tell me what you think

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That was really cool. Real catchy, and there was still alot of emotion in it too. Nice job. I really like writing songs too, so if you want, you can check out the newest song I wrote 'My Turn'.

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