Memories Comments

Malaika good start! just a little advice don't go extra mile on rhyming.... for a start go with blank verse and then gradually move to the rhymes. You have potential don't let it go waste.... Best

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww malaika is a genine poet born for writing poems! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! excellent 10++++++ invite ur classmates to read it! its an honour of having u as my classmate and wonderful poem! !

hello malaika. your poem is nice but the fact is that it's too short and on top of that i didnt understand certain statements. like for eg the 7th line. do you mean that certain people consider memories as a part of life. but memories cannot be a part of life they are the past and past is gone. pls do submit new poems. it is interesting to have a classmate of mine on poemhunter. Your poem is really something that you have written from your inner mind and that is appreciable. keep up the good job and keep going! !