Tuesday, January 23, 2018

Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

there was a time when we are together
those past days are as fresh as a morning dew.
those days are gone now, its no more
feels like you don't even remember it.
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Hanley Sarvesh
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2018

when i see your eyes i can just see how much you hate me feeling of you hating me makes me die from inside....fabulous poetic imagination! Loved reading your poem!

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Hanley. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 23 January 2018

writing is a way to say that you love and you care and suffer too is a way of liberating when writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i vote 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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