Saturday, January 12, 2008

Memories In Yellow Comments

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In August, she hung yellow curtains in the window
She danced and sang along to the radio
She flung paint across a canvas and
Laughed when the walls were splattered
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Frumious Bandersnatch
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Mary Gordley 13 January 2008

Very well written with the repetition of the yellow tones in each of the first three stanzas. I also think there is great impact in the way the last lines are contracted by comparison. Of course I love the name you chose to use. I can still render an accurate recitation of Jabberwocky.

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