Memories Of You...... Poem by Ashley A.S

Memories Of You......

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memories of you
memories of you I'll always have
memories i love the most

the times you held my hand
the times you held me tight
the times you made me laugh
memories i love the most

when i cried you whipped my tears
when i fall you helped me up
when i frowned you made me laugh

memories of you i'll always have

the time you touch me for the frist time
we were both young but it left it's mark
and now that we're all grow
it's time to say our goodbyes.....
i will have build a live away from you
you will have to do the same
but no one in this world could take your place in my heart
cuz you are my first true love.

looking back at all you did
makes me think..why?
why is it that you must go?
why is it that we have no chose?
why is it that you never leave my heart?
looking forward and wishing i had more time
time to find out if he's the one.
the one that we take over the heart that once belonged to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 22 February 2009

This is a poem with an interesting take on a couple of relationships but it does not read as well as it should because some of the words need to be checked by the writer to make sure the words are spelled correctly. If the corrections are made, it should be a very nice little poem. GW62

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VEER the ultimate boy 20 February 2009

its a lovely poem full of feellings..........really touching memories you have.......but little bit of sad i wish you for your better life....keep writing thanks..........10+++++

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