Memory Poem by Peace Aisogun

Memory

Rating: 5.0


Long time no see
stranger, you remember me?
The way we moved and matched w/ ease
The way you seemed to understand me
It's been a while but I came back to see
Is there any way we could fix things
And return to the way it use to be
The way we flowed so easily
I was wondering, do you remember me?

Long time no see,
I was calling just to check if you feel what I feel
See as I see
Dream as I dream
Remember how we were always in synch
I just want to get back to it
When it was more than just me
So I'm hoping you remember me
Cuz I remember you.... clearly

The way we understood each other
I did not feel the same with friends or brothers
you were my comrade, my trusted one

I picked you over every one
you were myu every thing and there are times when I will wonder
Because now I close my eyes and ask myself out loud
Do you think about me now?
Do you remember me? Do you remember us together?

what ever happened to forever?
if you ever retire from your job as a stranger
sit back and close your eyes
think back to the past and i promise I will be there
i will be attached to all of you memories
you will never forget me
but i will not be within your reach
because i will be gone with the wind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 26 September 2011

Very interesting choice of words and structure. I really like this, you're good at putting a poem together. Very beautiful writing, and you are right, there's nothing as unique as each individual memory.

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Dave Walker 19 September 2011

Good poem nice flow to it. Lets see some more. May i invite you to read one of my poems Called, for michael hicky. A true story

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