Memory inflamed the mote in my eye
in the still watch of the night,
then tears rolled down.
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:)))) Dear Shakil Ahmed [as in box below].. it's a bit too difficult for a poet who died in 531 AD to read some of your poems and leave comments, as you kindly ask him.. ;) and the same difficulties, for sure, Abu Layla al-Muhalhel will have in following your amusing advice to keep on writing.. ;) please, pardon my smile, but your comment is really funny ;) Cheers
nice poem, well-penned, please continue writing, you have the talent, use it, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.
This is only the first 6 verses out of nearly 40 verses of the poem Abu Layla is the greatest