Monday, November 2, 2015

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Memory inflamed the mote in my eye
in the still watch of the night,
then tears rolled down.
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Abu Layla al-Muhalhel
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Khalid Alakoor 01 April 2019

This is only the first 6 verses out of nearly 40 verses of the poem Abu Layla is the greatest

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 November 2015

:)))) Dear Shakil Ahmed [as in box below].. it's a bit too difficult for a poet who died in 531 AD to read some of your poems and leave comments, as you kindly ask him.. ;) and the same difficulties, for sure, Abu Layla al-Muhalhel will have in following your amusing advice to keep on writing.. ;) please, pardon my smile, but your comment is really funny ;) Cheers

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Shakil Ahmed 02 November 2015

nice poem, well-penned, please continue writing, you have the talent, use it, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.

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