Mending Heart Poem by Danielle Phillips

Mending Heart



I met you only days ago,
but here you are already in my heart.
I’m not so sure if this is love though,
It’s so close I’m falling apart.

My life never has meaning,
but I hope this will be the time
I think about you with all my being.
I don’t know how you feel, but I want you as mine.

I can never tell how others feel,
but with you it’s a little different.
I wish you could see all this zeal,
I wonder if you wert sent.

All I know is this is real
Always dreamed of this day
Right away I could see how you feel
Only wish I could say
Not wanting this feeling to die

My head is spinning with a thousand thoughts
In the end it will turn out right
Changing my mind everyday but I always come back to loving you
Have my heart in your hands
A careful touch you possess
End my day with a kiss from your lips
Life I thought was doomed, but that was before I met you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moriah Reyes 13 October 2009

hmmm....you always have to be careful of who you give your heart to...you have to first see if they are worthy/trustworthy to hold it! Wait it out a few days...get to know him..(like testing the water) and if all seems well, write him a letter or note or something....be careful what you say and dont get too mushy because a note in the wrong hands can be a dangerous thing! I liked this poem! It is very sweet of you....and at the same time alarming....be careful..alright?

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Danny H 13 October 2009

danielle very very good :) confusing yet good

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