Mental Chatter Poem by Sai Preethi

Mental Chatter



Amid darkness, I ponder
Over all the mental squander.
Of trivial things, a many
Nothing worth a penny.
Time comes and goes
Without healing woes.
With too proud a mind
Becomes difficult to unwind.
Loneliness, a best friend
Reminds of wounds to mend
And reveals the cure
It was I who set the lure.
A trap made by self
Don't need a cry for help.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first attempt to write something that resembles a poem. Corrections and suggestions are welcome.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joshua Fegley 02 January 2013

Awesome! In a dark kind of way, which I like. Keep at it. Maybe divide it into three or four sections.

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