Green strips of paper
Float past outstretched fingertips
The wind laughs aloud
You prefer praise, Ms Hat and praise I will give. Thoroughly enjoyable. I'm rather taken with your balminess and I love the image of the wing laughing. Well done.
I think it's good as far as Haikus go, come on peole, give me some feed back here!
To cause no confusion this is a haiku, or at least an attempt at one. I have never been able to fully appreciate haikus, and I thought that I should at least experiment with the idea. Criticism and suggestions are welcome, but i would prefer praise.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I MEANT ITS SOO GOOD good rhmye