Giovanna Marasco

Rookie (22nd September 1992 / A hospital)

Merciful Wind - Poem by Giovanna Marasco

Green strips of paper
Float past outstretched fingertips
The wind laughs aloud

Comments about Merciful Wind by Giovanna Marasco

  • (5/22/2006 3:21:00 PM)

    You prefer praise, Ms Hat and praise I will give. Thoroughly enjoyable. I'm rather taken with your balminess and I love the image of the wing laughing. Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/20/2006 11:01:00 AM)

    I think it's good as far as Haikus go, come on peole, give me some feed back here! (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2006 8:57:00 AM)

    To cause no confusion this is a haiku, or at least an attempt at one. I have never been able to fully appreciate haikus, and I thought that I should at least experiment with the idea.
    Criticism and suggestions are welcome, but i would prefer praise.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 19, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, July 16, 2010

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