Merciful Wind

Rating: 5.0

Green strips of paper
Float past outstretched fingertips
The wind laughs aloud

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
james 06 February 2019

I MEANT ITS SOO GOOD good rhmye

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james 06 February 2019

this is a piece of

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Daniel Tyler 22 May 2006

You prefer praise, Ms Hat and praise I will give. Thoroughly enjoyable. I'm rather taken with your balminess and I love the image of the wing laughing. Well done.

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Santana Marasco 20 April 2006

I think it's good as far as Haikus go, come on peole, give me some feed back here!

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Santana Marasco 20 April 2006

To cause no confusion this is a haiku, or at least an attempt at one. I have never been able to fully appreciate haikus, and I thought that I should at least experiment with the idea. Criticism and suggestions are welcome, but i would prefer praise.

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