Meth Poem by dawnsue hillman

Meth

Rating: 5.0


You make me interesting and fun.
You make me a priority to everyone,
when you are mine.
You make me happy in a fantasy.
You make me forget reality,
when you are mine.

You make me lose my mind.
You make my teeth grind,
when you are his.
I can't complete a thought.
I feel so used and bought,
when you are his.

You make my eyes burn.
You make my stomach churn,
when you are gone.
If you could truly care, I say,
you wouldn't make me feel this way,
when you are gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Lucero 28 October 2007

Dawnsue, Compelling and harrowing piece. Meth...an artificial heaven to be sure. Peace, Ray

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