Mickey Hits The Jackpot Poem by Edmund V. Strolis

Mickey Hits The Jackpot



Mickey, still not quite seven could run like the wind
Slap, slap, slap. those barefeet on the hot street
Brooklyn on an August day, no shirt, no shoes, no way
Here comes Mickey hauling down the street

Heeeeey he squeals, come on, let's goooooo!
No governor's reprieve could match this good news
A fireman tapped the hydrant and let the water fly!
Every kid in every brownstone heard about it too

Now some folks find the lottery to be a big deal
Some folks try to take more than they give to the jar
Stashing it away for the casino and the numbers
What Mickey won that day beats the lottery by far

Mickey Hits The Jackpot
Friday, January 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: joy,peace,wealth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Okay a bit of an average poem, clearly rushed but nonetheless the sentiment is there.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 16 January 2016

Another beautiful character portrait capturing the raw beauty of childhood... a time when money doesn't matter and joy is the ultimate goal. Joy wins! Lovely sentiment!

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Kelly Kurt 16 January 2016

The sentiment far outweighs any form. Well done

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