Midnight At Eight - A Timely Poem Poem by Linda Ori

Midnight At Eight - A Timely Poem

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Time is so confining -
Einstein had the right intent
In third dimension we exist
In fourth, time can be bent;
Why not exist in timeless space
In future, past and now
I think it makes a lot more sense
Although I don't know how;
If this may be our only hour
And if we blow this moment
Then we may never meet again
Or have time for atonement
So I think we should change the hours
And eliminate the wait
I'll meet you at midnight in my own time -
So let's make it midnight at eight!


(How's That for Timing?) MNA

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Not a member No 4 12 February 2007

If only! Even if we could just slow it down a little - or stop the aging process. In time! perhaps! A suitable compromise achieved in the end. Intriguing and appealing thought. If democracy could deliver it, I think we'd all vote in favour. Anyway, have to rush! Good writing as always Linda. You stir up the grey matter. xx jim

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IMPECABLE, ACTUALLY....SOLID VERSING...YOUR MOST RECENT COLLECTION OF NEW WORK HAS A REFRESHING&PICTORIAL SMACK TO IT....AND THIS PARTICULAR PIECE IS NO EXCEPTION''''''''FRANK.

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