Sunday, July 23, 2023
Milking The Cow Until Dry Comments
Rating: ★4.0
In the barn's embrace, a cow I spy,
Her udders full, the milk runs high.
With gentle hands, I milk with care,
Each drop collected, a treasure rare.
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James McLain
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Bri Edwards
30 July 2023
'The udder is a single mass hanging beneath the animal, consisting of pairs of mammary glands with protruding teats.' Therefore I'd use an apostrophe in f\ront of the 's' in 'udders'. : )
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2/28/2026 12:00:14 AM # 1.0.0
James, I REALLY liked stanza 1, but the 2nd stanza I'd work on a bit more. Like some cows, some poems beg to be handled MORE! : ) bri but I give 4 stars ****