Thursday, August 17, 2006

Mind And Heart And Soul Comments

Rating: 4.5

A stranger asked me
For my mind
Which I willingly
Gave
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Lisa Carter
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Steve Fulk 17 August 2006

I really liked the way you incorperated the functions of each form. The mind=thought, the heart=beat.....really nice way to set a poem in motion......Steve

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Goldy Locks 17 August 2006

interesting take. i’ve never heard the mind, heart, & soul relayed such as you’ve done here. liked it, Sus

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