Sunday, February 25, 2018

Mind's Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Water drops spill
Porous container makes
foolish effort to keep it captive.
I was making a snare
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Sujoy Bhattacharya
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

I was listening with my blinded eyes the alien discourse - how to cure the malady of the ailing earth. how to cure the evilllllll here on earth.......it is the duty of a poet, to think, philosophize as you do dear poet. a fine poem. tony

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 February 2018

Humming birds were mute! The singing rivulet kept mum! Listless wind closed hid his wings. The desert camel had a desire long-cherished to fly with the Unicorn. Wow poet you have sung the song of the cosmos so well. Loved this poem so much. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++

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