Thursday, June 23, 2016

Mirage Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is a mirage, yet I can reach it
Not of water, but of desires
Not of roads, but of life
Still, I fail what it requires
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Great Victor
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 June 2016

Yet I see the mirage again It mocks my desperation But my victory smile's on - Perhaps what I'm bringing, makes mirages a true torn. Beautifully written. Nice to read.10 marks for it. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

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Great Victor 18 April 2017

Thank you Sir.. for the encouragement!

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