Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Missing My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

writing down my pain
trying to refrain
from my mind going insane
hold on to something strong,
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Lola Romero
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

A wonderful composition on the pain of love. Love it.10++

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Colin Jeffery 16 September 2008

A very good poem revealing the pain of love.

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Tai Chi Italy 16 September 2008

Could do with an edit here dear Lola! Begging is not a pretty site either, but good luck in your quest! lol Tai, hoping the last lines come true!

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