Missing You Poem by Kamand Kojouri

Missing You

Rating: 5.0


Missing you,
I missed a part of me
I shared with you
that's now gone.

Missing you,
when really,
it was the way you made me feel
and the things you made us do.

Missing you
I shouldn't be.
But I can't help missing
who I was with you.

Missing you,
I missed
and missed so much of the world
and wasn't even missed in return.

Wednesday, May 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart,forget,goodbye,heart,love,miss you,missing,remember,break up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 06 May 2016

Very well done. Rhymes are not always necessary and some poems are better without. Better no rhymes than ones that seem forced.

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Kamand Kojouri 19 June 2016

Thank you, Kim. I definitely agree with you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2016

Missing you I shouldn't be. But I can't help missing who I was with you. a very well expressed poem of love, breaking up, the pain, the suffering, the illusion, love is always a mystery. th ank you for this beautiful poem . tony

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Kamand Kojouri 19 June 2016

Thank you for your kind words, Dr. Tony.

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Musawir Raakh 04 May 2016

Good1, keep it up, try to compose it in rhymes, it would add charm to your compositions

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Kamand Kojouri 19 June 2016

Thank you very much, Musawir. I'll keep that in mind.

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