Mistakes Poem by Lotlot Diaz

Mistakes



No man, however great, has made
no errors big or small.
He's great because his mistakes
Didn't cause him to fall.

Saturday, December 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
life is about surviving, to our challenges we are distined only to get through with them...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi A 18 December 2016

He is great because his mistakes didn't cause him to fall - the idea is redundant. He knows how to get over his mistakes and make less and less errors in life. No man, however great, has made no errors big or small. See the sentence. No man, however great, has made errors big or small will convey the right idea. I know that this was what you had intended to say. You may properly edit. Thanks. I appreciate you for one thing. You are able to convey your ideas in just four verses. That is good. Poetry need not be lengthy.

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