Moment Of Anger Poem by soumia benmechiche

Moment Of Anger

Rating: 5.0


One time you want to run away
To go and never look back
You feel that you hate people
And you hate yourself
You didn't make any mistake
But you want to punish yourself
To broke every thing that make you happy
And you want to be in the cage of sadness forever
You think all these things when you are angry
Your brain tell you that you are wrong but your heart want to explose...
But after few time you'll forget
And you'll be stronger than you were
And finally you realize that you learnt many things and your belief in God has increased
Which give you the power to fly...to reach be on the sky
And you'll know that everywhere you go God will protect you
Just trust...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 March 2009

Moments of anger can be overcome by trust and faith on God. Keep writing, Soumia. Best Wishes Naseer

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Justice For All 14 March 2009

very nice poem just keep writing.

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One time you want to run away To go and never look back You feel that you hate people And you hate yourself will be consdiered a cowardice act...never hate a person or self but reform it...10 read mine.... cowardice actt.... i am disgrace and partially truth... as a poet u have stunned me and grounded as well...hasmukh47@ym

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Malcolm The Last. 18 March 2009

Anger is difficult to control sometimes, especially when one blames themselves for situations gone wrong.

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Chitra - 15 March 2009

well worded...the innate emotion well described

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~ Jon London ~ 15 March 2009

True emotional pour fills the page with feeling,10

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Muhammad Ali 15 March 2009

pretty ideas arranged in your poem, nice work 10

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