Moon Poem by Bethany Waters

Moon

Rating: 4.5


Even the moon has abandoned
The drifter’s soul.
Only faint glimmers move across the sky
Light too brief to be caught
To far to be held in a jar
Or shared with a similar condition.
Gone to explore a new place
To break free of the infinite
And challenge the fated trail.
Leaving the stars stuck in their places

Monday, October 19, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: places,leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shamik Kumar Bose 04 December 2009

This is a great Poem, Bethany. The revolt like Promeatheus, challenging the Infinity, uncaring, daring, leaving the stars struck, not even a moon inside a drifter's soul.. all these are fantastic.10++

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