Thursday, June 25, 2009

Moon Like Lass Comments

Rating: 5.0

The whole night how could she hides in the clouds?
Whenever she appears I'll tell her politely;
'Please come down my pretty moody
And touch the earth with your frozen heels
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 25 June 2009

Lovely title and the contents of your poem does not disappoint. Excellent, Nimal. Always your friend, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 25 June 2009

A charming, eccentric little love story with the heart of a Haiku. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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