Hamza Al Saieedy

Rookie - 20 Points (1994/7/28 / The-Qar \ iraq)

Moon Message - Poem by Hamza Al Saieedy

Thou are a knight of your own story
Save the day and have your glory
Well done fight, don't be sorry

Don't be sorry thou are right..
Best battles end with no fight!
I wrote my vows through the deep nigh.
Watching the moon's shining light,
Watching the moon like a page is white,
End my message and send through heights.
But, what words of love can I possibly write?
Thou tell me;
In what world can I be your dream knight?
The sentence of love hath no might,
Thou wait for me and hold on tight.
What words of love can I possibly write?

Saying I love you wont be enough,
I'd give the world; to see you laugh.
Thou know! :
Expressing my self was always rough,
But;
walk on my pain, I'll try to be tough..


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I improvised this poetry! I never made it to be written..
it will be much better if, we read it but not write it!
with thanks
Hamzeh.T.Ali.

Comments about Moon Message by Hamza Al Saieedy

  • Gajanan Mishra (2/6/2013 3:09:00 AM)


    The sentence of love. good poem. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 6, 2013



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