Morning Poem by Dan Walters

Morning

Rating: 2.7


It would be slantingly odd
To wake one afternoon
And not feel macabre
I’m not the slightest bit scared
I dream up these things all the time
And I always pull through
Around the middle of the day
When I try my damnedest
To live the life
But I pretty much always end up
Slipping through by the time I fall asleep
Having the same thought as I did
When I woke up
And all night long my dream
Just keeps on coming true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 27 February 2009

This is certainly an odd writing about the macabre. Here is a writer who dreams all day and night. Whether awake or asleep, he seems to have the thoughts of the dream that comes true. I don't envy anyone like this. I would be scared. But, better him than me. I'm satisfied just to read about them. So, write those down, you may have a novel. GW62

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