Saturday, October 20, 2007

Morning Ritual Comments

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I wake up feeling sick and sore.
Looking around, there's no relief.
So, I've got to go to the store -
One more pain to add to my grief.
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Ima Ryma
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2020

The room is spinning round and round. In dizziness, I try to dress. The hands do shake, the head does pound. I look and feel like one mess. very fine poem. your poems are vivid and clear and there is a simplicity in your writings that attract. tony

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