Mother Poem by lil miss

Mother

Rating: 3.4


this isnt just a rhyme or a one page verse,

i tell it from my heart - from the cradle to the hearse,

i came to bring the pain since my mothers water burst,

she's never been a person with whom i can converse,

and for her to show affection.. well that'd be a first,

the relationship we share surely is a curse,

and this is Hell to me, 'cause i can think of nothing worse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Myrtle Thomas 06 April 2009

I found this a very nice write, you rhyme and rhythm flowed freely.Good visuals, very well penned.A 10

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