Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Mother Loves Me Comments

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I want to be like you.
Aways have,
and always will.
I loved you with all my heart.
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Kelsea Osterman
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Kevin Maroney 16 November 2009

Very touching. I don't think I can relate, but it is very well done. It really takes you on a spiritual journey, not just telling what happened, but what happened in the speaker's mind and emotions as well, their inner turmoil. I'm sorry it took me so long to comment, but for some reason, for a while it wasn't letting me type anything into the search engine - 'error - page not found' XD. Still having that problem a bit XD

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DEE RAAIN 03 November 2009

WOW really understandable. To be honest this is such a great poem. i so feel what it's like so yeah..! ! WELL DONE

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