Sunday, December 4, 2016

Mourning Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sudden March winds carry high black
birds drunkenly across the blue grey above
the dark line of snaking cars below,
between the bending trees and sullen grass,
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William Richards
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Kim Barney 04 December 2016

Very nice. I especially like the last verse. You have expressed yourself well in this poem.

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2016

Brought piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing William.

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